Homework
Bring BE book
Revise and type CR essay.Staple to oringinal drafts and packet
Objective
SWBAT edit for punctuation packet errors
SWBAT revise to strengthen analytical essay
Agenda
blog
warmup:grammer practice
peer edit
revision/BE background notes
Example:Run-on sentence-Another example is when they move in to the palace flophouse and then they get there dog named Darling together and take care of her like there own child.
Summary
Today in Ms.Mattews class we came in and copied the warm up editing practice to find run-on and fragment sentences worksheet and we used our composition error symbols to help correct our warm up.I learned how to find sentence fragment and run-on sentences in a essay.We began to correct our partners Cannery row essay and give warm and cool feedback.I also learned how to fix my mistakes on my essay and peer critique and correctly fix the errors in an essay.
By.Shaniya M.
Friday, November 13, 2009
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